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The information about how much fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000From an overall perspective, it readily apparent that the high demand was pizza and humbugs whereas the craze of fish and chips was observed downward trendLooking into details, Initial year the number of pizza was 10 times per year whereas it was reached at 60 times per year in 1980. in next 10 years, it proliferated and stood at 90 times per year.

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