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Recycling waste from home

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Waste has been a serious worldwide problem for years. The consumption pattern that is not followed by responsible behavior has created a critical damage for the environment. Waste is not a problem of several persons or groups, it is a collective problem, thus it should be solved by doing collective change. Hence, the role of the government, private sectors, communities, other institutions, including individual is crucial. The simplest change can be made from our hands, our home. The current level of household waste that is recycled is still low. We still can boost the numbers by recycling our household waste, but, it needs a behavior change from every individual. There are so many ways that can be used to drive a person to change the behavior. The first step is by raising the awareness that small contribution matters and every single step is important, including by segregating, composting, and recycling waste from home. Unfortunately, raising awareness is not enough. In order to maximize the implementation of recycling waste, it needs a ‘dictating change’ from the government. Law enforcement is one of the ways that can be used. The regulation should be made by the government to enable the ecosystem. For example, the scheme of incentive and disincentive is also possible to be implemented in addition by the regulation of recycling household waste. Based on the survey conducted, people tends to respond to incentives and disincentives once the regulation is already made. By the time, the behavior of people can changed and it can lead to increase the percentage of recycled household waste. In my opinion, law is very important aspect that can support the creation of new environment, in this case, is the recycling behavior.
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Waste
has been a serious worldwide problem for years. The consumption pattern
that is
not followed by responsible
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behavior
has created
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a critical damage
for the environment.
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Waste
is not a problem of several persons or groups, it is a collective problem,
thus
it should
be solved
by doing collective
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change
.
Hence
, the role of the
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government
, private sectors, communities, other institutions, including individual is crucial.

The simplest
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change
can
be made
from our hands, our home. The
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current
level of
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household
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waste
that
is recycled
is
still
low. We
still
can boost the numbers by
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recycling
our
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household
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waste
,
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but
, it needs a
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behavior
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change
from every individual.

There are
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so
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many
ways that can be
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used
to drive a person to
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change
the
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behavior
. The
first
step is by raising the awareness that
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small
contribution matters and every single step is
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important
, including by segregating, composting, and
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recycling
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waste
from home.

Unfortunately, raising awareness is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
. In order to maximize the implementation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
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waste
, it needs a ‘dictating
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change’
from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
. Law enforcement is one of the ways that can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
. The regulation should
be made
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to enable the ecosystem.

For example
, the scheme of incentive and disincentive is
also
possible to
be implemented
in addition
by the regulation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. Based on the survey conducted,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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tends
to respond to incentives and disincentives once the regulation is already made. By the time, the
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behavior
of
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people
can
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changed
and it can lead to increase the percentage of recycled
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household
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waste
. In my opinion, law is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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important
aspect that can support the creation of new environment,
in this case
, is the
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recycling
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behavior
.
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IELTS essay Recycling waste from home

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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