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Resent years tv has contributed to change people is quality of life.to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It t is true that TV has changed people look. it is so because tv is evalable in every home. in this essay i discus about given statment. Tv is provid is basic knowledge about all world it gives me knowledge about different aspects of life. When we see tv we learn about different languages and cultures. When we see different cultures in tv we are also effected by those culture which we are seeing in tv it is good for us because we learn about different cultures of all world and it increases my knowledge. What when we seeing tv for long time it is not good for our health because watching tv for long time not good for our eyes. and when we sit for long time and watch tv than we become lazy and our health is so week. so thebtv is not watching for long time. to sum up tv is good for our as well as dangerous for our.
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IELTS essay Resent years tv has contributed to change people is quality of life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
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