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RECYCLING WASTE FROM HOME

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Waste has been a serious worldwide problem for years. The consumption pattern that is not followed by responsible behaviour has created critical damage to the environment. Waste is not a problem of several persons or groups. It is a collective problem. Thus it should be solved by doing collective change. Hence, the government, private sectors, communities, other institutions, including individuals, is crucial. The simplest change can be made from our hands, our home. The current level of household waste that is recycled is still low. We still can boost the numbers by recycling our household waste, but every individual needs a behaviour change. There are so many ways that can be used to drive a person to change their behaviour. The first step is by raising the awareness that small contribution matters and every step is important, including segregating, composting, and recycling waste from home. Unfortunately, raising awareness is not enough. To maximize the implementation of recycling waste, it needs a 'dictating change' from the government. Law enforcement is one of the ways that can be used. The government should make the regulation to enable the ecosystem. For example, the scheme of incentive and disincentive is also possible to be implemented by the regulation of recycling household waste. Based on the survey, people tend to respond to incentives and disincentives once the regulation is made. Over time, people's behaviour can change, and it can lead to an increase in the percentage of recycled household waste. In my opinion, the law is a very important aspect that can support creating a new environment, in this case, is the recycling behaviour.
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Waste
has been a serious worldwide problem for years. The consumption pattern
that is
not followed by responsible
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behaviour
has created critical damage to the environment.
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Waste
is not a problem of several persons or groups. It is a collective problem.
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Thus
it should
be solved
by doing collective
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change
.
Hence
, the
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government
, private sectors, communities, other institutions, including individuals, is crucial.

The simplest
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change
can
be made
from our hands, our home. The
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current
level of
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household
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waste
that
is recycled
is
still
low. We
still
can boost the numbers by
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recycling
our
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household
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waste
,
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but
every individual needs a
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behaviour
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change
.

There are
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so
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many
ways that can be
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used
to drive a person to
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change
their
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behaviour
. The
first
step is by raising the awareness that
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small
contribution matters and every step is
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important
, including segregating, composting, and
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recycling
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waste
from home.

Unfortunately, raising awareness is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
. To maximize the implementation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
, it needs a 'dictating
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
' from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
. Law enforcement is one of the ways that can be
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used
. The
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government
should
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make
the regulation to enable the ecosystem.

For example
, the scheme of incentive and disincentive is
also
possible to
be implemented
by the regulation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. Based on the survey,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
tend to respond to incentives and disincentives once the regulation
is made
. Over time,
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people
's
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behaviour
can
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change
, and it can lead to an increase in the percentage of recycled
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household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. In my opinion, the law is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
aspect that can support creating a new environment,
in this case
, is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
.
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IELTS essay RECYCLING WASTE FROM HOME

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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