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Recycling should be made compulsary .

Recycling should be made compulsary. bEEx3
Recycling is a method and process that the useless things are reprocessed or reproduced. Many countries utilize this method in the world and believe advantages of process. In this essay, will be indicated damages of rubbish to environment and benefits of recycling, moreover how we should be involved to this process and at the end of the essay we will know that why recycling should be made compulsary. Firstly, there are plenty of garbage that we create every single day like, household, plastic, electronic, paper waste and throw away somewhere around the world. Disappearing this rubbish under ground is taken many years and some of them do not disappear at all. This situation causes water, air, land pollution therefore, brings to climate change, global warming and so on. Pollution impacts public health and destroys animal habitat. The number of chemicals of factories are drained to seas, oceans, water supplies and because of that a lot of fish is killed. Furtermore, producing the paper products is caused of cutting trees down and destroying a lot of forests. If we need to came to conclusion, we may say that utilizing and producing something we need, creates a lot of trash. Secondly, some of garbage can be recycled, reprocessed and reproduced. Recycling helps us for saving expenses, protecting natural resources, minimizing waste and so on. We have to do something about the trash around the world, because earth is suffering from pollution. There are many ways of reducing waste and garbage. If we want to reduce plastic things, we should use our own cloth bags instead of plastic bags for shopping. Some waste can be used for producing new products and paper rubbish can be reproduced. Actually, there should be various of colors for each trash and we ought to separate our all garbage for helping these processes. This method is used many countries in the world now. Separating trash can be made recycling process easier. In conclusion, we should take this circumstance seriously and take a responsibility to take care of this world that we live on. In my opinion, recycling is not popular in our country, however it should be. The government must to find the way of involving people to recycling and people should be informed about the danger and interested in this process.
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Recycling
is a method and
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process
that the useless things
are reprocessed
or reproduced.
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Many
countries utilize this method in the
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world
and believe advantages of
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process
. In this essay, will
be indicated
damages of rubbish to environment and benefits of
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recycling
,
moreover
how we should
be involved
to this
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process
and at the
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end
of the essay we will know that why
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recycling
should
be made
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compulsary
.

Firstly
, there are
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plenty
of garbage that we create every single day like, household, plastic, electronic, paper
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waste
and throw away somewhere around the
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world
. Disappearing this rubbish under ground
is taken
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many
years and
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some
of them do not disappear at all. This situation causes water, air, land pollution
therefore
, brings to climate
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change
, global warming and
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so
on. Pollution impacts public health and
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destroys
animal habitat. The number of chemicals of factories
are drained
to seas, oceans, water supplies and
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because
of that
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a lot of
fish
is killed
.
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Furtermore
, producing the paper products
is caused
of cutting trees down and destroying
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a lot of
forests. If we need to came to conclusion, we may say that utilizing and producing something we need, creates
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a lot of
trash.

Secondly
,
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some of garbage
can
be recycled
, reprocessed and reproduced.
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Recycling
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helps
us for saving expenses, protecting natural resources, minimizing
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waste
and
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so
on. We
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have to
do something about the trash around the
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world
,
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because
earth is suffering from pollution. There are
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many
ways of reducing
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waste
and garbage. If we want to
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reduce
plastic things, we should
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use
our
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own
cloth bags
instead
of plastic bags for shopping.
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Some
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waste
can be
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used
for producing new products and paper rubbish can
be reproduced
. Actually, there should be various of colors for each
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trash and
we ought to separate our all garbage for helping these
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processes
. This method is
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used
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many
countries in the
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world
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now
. Separating trash can
be made
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recycling
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process
easier.

In conclusion
, we should take this circumstance
seriously
and take a responsibility to take care of this
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world
that we
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live
on. In my opinion,
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recycling
is not popular in our country,
however
it should be. The
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government
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must to
find the way of involving
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people
to
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recycling
and
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people
should
be informed
about the
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danger
and interested in this
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process
.
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IELTS essay Recycling should be made compulsary.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
384 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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