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Recycling of waste across cities

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Disposal of waste has been a serious problem since past few decades. With rising population all over the globe, there has been a tremendous increase in waste being generated everyday and I agree to some extent that less actions are being taken by the people regarding recycling and goverments across all countries should give more focus on making recycling as a legal requirement. The cities are expanding haphazardly without any proper planning and more people have migrated from rural areas to urban areas creating a problem not only for collection of daily waste but also handling and disposing it in a proper manner. Goverments should implement regulations and spread awareness on ways where recycling of waste should start from each and every house. One use Plastic should be banned completely. It should be the first responsibility of every person to segregate dry waste and wet waste. To add on this, government has also started an initiative to provide funds to build small dumping yards in each and every housing societies so that all the wet waste that gets collected is recycled and decomposed properly in the constructed yard itself. This also solves the problem of dumping entire waste of a city in a dumping ground which takes years to decompose and also creates hygine issues which may affect the locality near the dumping gruond. People can also benefit from the manure that gets created which they can use in their own house or their farms to help nurture and grow plants. In some cities, government has also awarded cash rewards for the best housing socieities or apartments who achieve best possible ways to recycle waste entirely. Even governemnts are now planning to install garbage ATMs across the streets of cities, where a person can get a cash in return if he collects and dispose off waste in these installed machines. Thus, we can conclude that if government comes up with new intiatives and ideas which will create more interest among the citizens, recycling of waste won't become a serious issue in the coming years.
Disposal of
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waste
has been a serious problem since past few decades. With rising population all over the globe, there has been a tremendous increase in
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waste
being generated
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everyday
and I
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some
extent that
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less
actions are
being taken
by the
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people
regarding
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recycling
and
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goverments
across all countries should give more focus on making
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recycling
as a legal requirement.

The
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cities
are expanding
haphazardly
without any proper planning and more
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people
have migrated from rural areas to urban areas creating a problem not
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only
for collection of daily
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waste
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but
also
handling and disposing it
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in a proper manner
.

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Goverments
should implement regulations and spread awareness on ways where
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recycling
of
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waste
should
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start
from each and every
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house
. One
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use
Plastic should
be banned
completely. It should be the
first
responsibility of every person to segregate dry
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waste
and wet waste.

To
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add
on this,
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government
has
also
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started
an initiative to provide funds to build
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small
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dumping
yards in each and every housing societies
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so
that all the wet
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waste
that
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gets
collected
is recycled
and decomposed
properly
in the constructed yard itself. This
also
solves the problem of
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dumping
entire
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waste
of a city in a
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dumping
ground which takes years to decompose and
also
creates
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hygine
issues which may affect the locality near the
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dumping
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gruond
.
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can
also
benefit from the manure that
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gets
created which they can
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use
in their
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own
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house
or their farms to
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help
nurture and grow plants.

In
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some
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cities
,
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has
also
awarded cash rewards for the best housing
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socieities
or apartments who
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achieve best
possible ways to recycle
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waste
entirely
.

Even
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governemnts
are
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now
planning to install garbage ATMs across the streets of
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cities
, where a person can
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get
a cash in return if he collects and dispose off
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waste
in these installed machines.

Thus
, we can conclude that if
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government
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comes
up with new
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intiatives
and
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ideas
which will create more interest among the citizens,
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recycling
of
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waste
won't become a serious issue in the coming years.
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IELTS essay Recycling of waste across cities

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
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