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Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey

Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey Lb9YK

Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey. It is also noticeable that more women are without a job in England and Scotland than those of Wales and Northern Ireland. In 2013, the female unemployment ratio in England took the lead with 6. 8%, whereas only 6. 1% of unemployed women found in Scotland (second rank) when compared to the rest of the list. The bottom position belonged to the female percentage in Wales with 5. 4%, which was exactly 0. 2% lower than that of Northern Ireland.

Overall
, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed
 in Scotland over the survey. It is also
 noticeable that more women are without a job in England and Scotland than those of Wales and Northern Ireland.

In 2013, the female unemployment ratio in England took the lead with 6. 8%, whereas This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 6. 1% of unemployed women found in Scotland (second rank) when compared to the rest of the list. The bottom position belonged to the female percentage in Wales with 5. 4%, which was exactly 0. 2% lower than that of Northern Ireland. 

IELTS essay Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey

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