Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey

Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey Lb9YK

Overall, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed in Scotland over the survey. It is also noticeable that more women are without a job in England and Scotland than those of Wales and Northern Ireland. In 2013, the female unemployment ratio in England took the lead with 6. 8%, whereas only 6. 1% of unemployed women found in Scotland (second rank) when compared to the rest of the list. The bottom position belonged to the female percentage in Wales with 5. 4%, which was exactly 0. 2% lower than that of Northern Ireland.

Overall
, it is evident that while the figures for England, Wales and Northern Ireland underwent a downward trend, the opposite trend was observed
 in Scotland over the survey. It is also
 noticeable that more women are without a job in England and Scotland than those of Wales and Northern Ireland.

In 2013, the female unemployment ratio in England took the lead with 6. 8%, whereas This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 6. 1% of unemployed women found in Scotland (second rank) when compared to the rest of the list. The bottom position belonged to the female percentage in Wales with 5. 4%, which was exactly 0. 2% lower than that of Northern Ireland. 

What do you think?