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He has successfully passed the Soil Mechanics with me tha

He has successfully passed the Soil Mechanics with me tha 1Ao0M
He has successfully passed the Soil Mechanics with me that one of the main courses in the field of civil engineering. During this course, I found him a hard working student, interested in the subject, and with a very good perseverance. He attended classes regularly and submitted his projects and assignments on time. He also displayed great interest in research and his team work is excellent. So it is a great pleasure for me to strongly recommend him to participate in MEng civil engineering program and I am sure that he can gain master degree with a good score
He has
successfully
passed the Soil Mechanics with me that one of the main courses in the field of civil engineering. During this course, I found him a
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
student, interested in the subject, and with a
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
perseverance. He attended classes
regularly
and submitted his projects and assignments on time. He
also
displayed great interest in research and his team work is excellent.

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So
it is a great pleasure for me to
strongly
recommend him to participate in
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MEng
civil engineering
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program and
I am sure that he can gain master degree with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
score
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IELTS essay He has successfully passed the Soil Mechanics with me tha

Essay
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2 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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