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1. I’ll do my homework as soon as I get home. 2. Unless they pay me more money I will quit my job. 3. You’ll find the love of your life if you look for it. 4. If I can get tickets for the concert, we'll go on a date. 5. If you press this red button, you will set off a nuclear bomb. 1. I’ll do my homework as soon as I get home. 2. Unless they pay me more money I will quit my job. 3. You’ll find the love of your life if you look for it. 4. If I can get tickets for the concert, we'll go on a date. 5. If you press this red button, you will set off a nuclear bomb.
1. I’ll do my homework as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
home.

2.
“Unless” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Unless
they pay me more money I will quit my job.

3. You’ll find the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
of your life if you look for it.

4. If I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
tickets for the concert, we'll go on a date.

5. If you press this red button, you will set off a nuclear bomb.

1. I’ll do my homework as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
home.

2.
“Unless” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Unless
they pay me more money I will quit my job.

3. You’ll find the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
of your life if you look for it.

4. If I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
tickets for the concert, we'll go on a date.

5. If you press this red button, you will set off a nuclear bomb.
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IELTS essay Record the sentences and upload the audio to Classroom.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
128 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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