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Recommendation of the best time to visit your hometown

Recommendation of the best time to visit your hometown 86lr5

My hometown is in wonogiri. Wonogiri is located in central java, Indonesia. My grandparents from my father live there. I usually visit my hometown once a year because it's quite far away from where I live now. But, due to covid-19, I haven't been visiting my hometown for almost 2 years. My hometown is surrounded by mountains and forests, so the weather can change drastically. The temperature can change from being extremely hot to below freezing. I think the best time to visit my hometown is in September because the weather in that month is quite pleasant, neither too hot nor too cold. And in September there is an annual festival that is only held in that month.

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hometown
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Wonogiri
is located
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live
 there. I usually
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hometown
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because
 it's quite far away from where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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now
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But
, due to Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid-19
, I haven't been visiting my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandneighborhoodfamilyfarmcountryhousehold
hometown
 for almost 2 years. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandneighborhoodfamilyfarmcountryhousehold
hometown
is surrounded
 by mountains and forests, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the weather can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
drastically
. The temperature can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 from being extremely
 hot to below freezing. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the best time to visit my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandneighborhoodfamilyfarmcountryhousehold
hometown
 is in September This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the weather in that month is quite pleasant, neither too hot nor too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
. And in September there is an annual festival that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 held in that month. 