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Recommendation letter for schoolarship to Tursunova Feruza

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It is privilege to have a student who shows dedication, attitude and love for academic subjects such Feruza. I understand that your Exchange Program is one of the top ones in USA and I will hopefully that Feruza deserves a place in it. I have known Feruza for two years in my capacity as DEAN of UZSWLU and examiner of formal examinations. I highly recommend Feruza Tursunova who is going to participate in UGRAD exchange Program There are several reasons why she is right candidate for this program in my opinion. Firstly her confidence in her freshman years. I lead Feruza Extra curricular activities and soon she proved herself as a open minded and sociable student among other students answering the same questions clearly and quickly. As a result at the end of the semester she also was able to get 96 point out of 100 which show how she assimilate knowledge as a first year student Secondly in her second year she impressed me with volunteering foreigns and it shows me her flexibility and adjusting to change conditions or environments. Furthemore, leading others give me understanding that how she can work in a team or as a part of a group. Finally I also impress with her project work on Environmental Awareness during the extra curricular activities where she explain the concept easily because of her devotion making capabilities and this quality will help her to deal with struggles in variety of situations. Another point I would like to say that is her willingness to listen. Feruza listen everyone's opinion when she talking with them and it is vital for her self development. And this year I am glad to advise Feruza on her thesis statement for speaking in foreign Languages such as Spanish, Chinese, English on the theme " Learning languages for academic growth. In addition to I know Feruza as a leader girl and I often see her when she participate in a university conference, also when she organize a lot of speaking clubs at the university and debate with students in different fields to find real talented students among them. Moreover she uses her ability to inspire orphaned students and this is unique trait in her character. Even though I am Dean of university I get some motivation from her and I am proved to give this recommendation for her. In conclusion, I am strongly recommend Feruza for this program and my expectation from this is that participating on this Feruza will serve for country development with her intelligence and leadership skills. Please don't hesitate to contact me directly if you have any further questions
It is privilege to have a
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dedication, attitude and
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love
for academic subjects such
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Feruza
. I understand that your Exchange Program is one of the top ones
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deserves a place in it. I have known
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Feruza
for two years in my capacity as DEAN of
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UZSWLU
and examiner of formal examinations.
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I
highly
recommend
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Feruza
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Tursunova
who is going to participate in
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UGRAD
exchange
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Program


There are several reasons why she is right candidate for this program in my opinion.
Firstly
her confidence in her freshman years. I lead
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Feruza
Extra curricular activities and
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soon
she proved herself as
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open minded
and sociable
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student
among other
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students
answering the same questions
clearly
and
quickly
.
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at the
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end
of the semester she
also
was able to
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get
96 point out of 100 which
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show
how she assimilate knowledge as a
first
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year
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student
Secondly
in her second
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year
she impressed me with volunteering
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foreigns
and it
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shows
me her flexibility and adjusting to
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change
conditions or environments.
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Furthemore
, leading others give me understanding that how she can work in a team or as a part of a group.
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Finally
I
also
impress with her project work on Environmental Awareness during the
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extra curricular
activities where she
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explain
the concept
easily
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because
of her devotion making capabilities and this quality will
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help
her to deal with struggles in variety of situations.

Another point I would like to say
that is
her willingness to listen.
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Feruza
listen everyone's opinion when
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she talking
with them and it is vital for her self development. And this
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year
I am glad to advise
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Feruza
on her thesis statement for speaking in foreign Languages such as Spanish, Chinese, English on the theme
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Learning languages for academic growth.
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to I know
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Feruza
as a leader girl and I
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see
her when she
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participate
in a university conference,
also
when she
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organize
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a lot of
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students
in
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different
fields to find real talented
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students
among them.
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Moreover
she
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uses
her ability to inspire orphaned
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students
and this is unique trait in her character.
Even though
I am Dean of university I
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get
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some
motivation from
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her and
I
am proved
to give this recommendation for her.

In conclusion
, I am
strongly
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recommend
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Feruza
for this program and my expectation from this is that participating on this
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Feruza
will serve for country development with her intelligence and leadership
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skills
.

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Please
don't hesitate to contact me
directly
if you have any
further
questions
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IELTS essay Recommendation letter for schoolarship to Tursunova Feruza

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
438 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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