In our modern society, women are more independent than ever before and they tend to continue working after the marriage and giving a birth to a child. However, while some people believe that women should concentrate on rearing children and houseworks, I personally disagree that idea.
To begin with, thanks to the efforts to gain the gender equity that were made for several decades ago, women have more chance to work than in the past. Although I acknowledge that some societies are not mature enough to understand the concept of gender equity and expect females to stay at home after marriage, I agree that husbands must be more supportive and responsible for raising children and domestic chores.
Another issue is a lack of understanding from the community. In fact, opponents of women who keep working after giving a birth claim that children need more or less the same amount of attention from their mothers and fathers. The role model is needed for children of both genders.
Finally, my strongest argue is that children whose parents work can be more independent than their peers with mothers who take care of them at home. Teenagers, for example, learn how to help their busy parents with chores or taking care of their younger siblings that are the important life skills.
In short, not only mothers can be financially independent by working, but children also can learn how to manage housework. Therefore, I do not disagree that women should work less in order to just spend time with their children.
In our modern society,
women
are more independent than ever
before and
they tend to continue working after the marriage and giving a birth to a child.
However
, while
some
people
believe that
women
should concentrate on rearing
children
and
houseworks
, I
personally
disagree that
idea
.
To
begin
with, thanks to the efforts to gain the gender equity that
were made
for several decades ago,
women
have more chance to work than in the past. Although I acknowledge that
some
societies are not mature
enough
to understand the concept of gender equity and
expect
females to stay at home after marriage, I
agree
that husbands
must
be more supportive and responsible for raising
children
and domestic chores.
Another issue is a lack of understanding from the community. In fact, opponents of
women
who
keep
working after giving a birth claim that
children
need more or less the same amount of attention from their mothers and fathers. The role model
is needed
for
children
of both genders.
Finally
, my strongest argue is that
children
whose parents work can be more independent than their peers with mothers who take care of them at home.
Teenagers
,
for example
, learn how to
help
their busy parents with chores or taking care of their younger siblings that are the
important
life
skills
.
In short, not
only
mothers can be
financially
independent by working,
but
children
also
can learn how to manage housework.
Therefore
, I do not disagree that
women
should work less in order to
just
spend time with their
children
.