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Recent year the number of crime committed by young people in major citis throughout the world is increasing.

Recent year the number of crime committed by young people in major citis throughout the world is increasing. 56XdA

In last few years, crime rate in the town is increasing day by day and most of the criminals are young people only. There are several root cause behind it and timely measure can automatically dilute the crime. My points are discussed I the ensuing paragraph. To commence with the reason for increasing young criminal the foremost one is unemployment. Students are studying hard getting good marks and after completion of the course when they come out to seek job but unable to get the work. In order to satisfy the family need they are forced to do crime like pocket chore drugs dealing and more. For instance, According to survey conducted by a reporter from Nigeria, It show that unemployment and other factor as a consequence they become criminals. There are few measure through which crime can be reduce. To embark with,

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crime
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people
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only
. There are several root cause behind it and timely measure can automatically
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crime
. My points are discussed
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hard
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come
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but
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get
 the work. In order to satisfy the family need they are forced
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crime
 like pocket chore drugs dealing and more. For instance
, According to survey conducted by a reporter from Nigeria, It Did you mean "shows"?shows
show
 that unemployment and other factor as a consequence they become criminals.

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crime
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reduce
. To embark with, 