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Reasons of Learning About the Past

Reasons of Learning About the Past nNdQ2
In these days people think that learning about the past is not important for us because we are living in the present, the other believe that learning about them will help us. In this essay I am going to discuss my opinion. On one hand, I think learning about the past not too important because we live in a different time. for me, History subject was the worst between the subject, there is no reason to learn about people that I haven't meet before. Also, it is very bored to learn about the older people and their live.   On other hand, I think we should to learn about the past and how they live and try to focus on their experiment that we need it in our life nowadays. learning about them will help us to discover the earth which we live in and also the planets around us. Also, we. can try their food, clothes and their habits maybe we will like it more than ours. In conclusion, we can say that sometimes we should to learn about the past because we could benefit about what they discover and what they eat or drink or maybe about what they use to dress. However, sometimes learning about the past when we are living in the present are too bored and worthless.
In these days
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learning
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past
is not
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important
for us
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we are living in the

present, the other believe that
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learning
about them will
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help
us. In this essay I am going to discuss my opinion.

On one hand, I
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think
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learning
about the
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past
not too
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important
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because
we
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live
in a
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different
time.
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for
me, History subject was the worst between the subject, there is no reason to
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learn
about
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people
that I haven't
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meet
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before
.
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, it is
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very
bored to
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learn
about the older
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people
and their
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live
.
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On other hand, I
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we should to
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learn
about the
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past
and how they
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live
and try to focus on their experiment that we need it in our life nowadays.
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learning
about them will
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help
us to discover the earth which we
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live
in and
also
Consider using "the surrounding planets".
the planets around us
.
Also
, we. can try their food, clothes and their habits maybe we will like it more than ours.

In conclusion
, we can say that
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sometimes
we should to
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learn
about the
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past
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because
we could benefit about what they discover and what they eat or drink or maybe about what they
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use to
dress.
However
,
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sometimes
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learning
about the
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when we are living in

the present are too bored and worthless.

IELTS essay Reasons of Learning About the Past

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
222 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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