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Some people are not happy with the work from home option while the other set of people are enjoying it and want it to be permanent. What's your opinion on this?

Some people are not happy with the work from home option while the other set of people are enjoying it and want it to be permanent. What's your opinion on this? 66l2B
The pandemic took a turn to a new norm from work from home to online schooling. With the risk of stepping out office was brought to our homes and the work from just like that became the new normal. Work from home opened up to a comfortable working atmosphere and anywhere working. Employees didn’t have to follow a certain dress code but they started experimenting with formals (blazers) for tops and pyjamas for bottoms. This would not only fit the office screen dress code but also give a comfortable homely experience. Many also reported to have the flexibility to be present for personal or family involvements. Having access to munching food, listening to music and work, working at one’s comfort space and so much more flexibility was available during work from home. However, this was a temporary solution to the on-going Covid 19 pandemic and work from the office will return once the virus is defeated. Work from home had its fair amount of cons too. Many reported being unable to focus due to the disturbance around the houses while many faced health issues like red and irritated eyes. With no physical activity required it took a toll to health and showed negative effects. In conclusion, it’s a necessity to include some amount of work from home even while the pandemic comes to end which keeps any employee included in personal life and as well as not put a hold on work. This will keep a balance and affect one’s physical and mental health.
The pandemic took a turn to a new norm from
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work
from home to online schooling. With the
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risk
of stepping out office
was brought
to our
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homes
and the
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work
from
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just
like that became the new normal.

Work from home opened up to a comfortable working atmosphere and anywhere working. Employees didn’t
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have to
follow a certain dress code
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but
they
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started
experimenting with formals (blazers) for tops and
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pyjamas
for bottoms. This would not
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only
fit the office screen dress code
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but
also
give a comfortable homely experience.
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reported to have the flexibility to be present for personal or family involvements. Having access to munching food, listening to music and
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, working at one’s comfort space and
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much more flexibility was available during
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work
from home.

However
, this was a temporary solution to the
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Covid 19
pandemic and
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from the office will return once the virus
is defeated
.
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from home had its
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reported being unable to focus due to the disturbance around the
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while
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faced health issues like red and irritated eyes. With no physical activity required it took a toll to health and
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negative
effects.

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, it’s a necessity to include
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amount of
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work
from home even while the pandemic
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any employee included in personal life and
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as not put a hold on
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. This will
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a balance and affect one’s physical and mental health.
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IELTS essay Some people are not happy with the work from home option while the other set of people are enjoying it and want it to be permanent. What's your opinion on this?

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