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Government is giving assistance to students during corona time. Do you agree or disagree?

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Corona has changed life throughout worldwide. Many part of society has been affected from this pandemic. Some come out of it but still many are in need. Country is working on welfare principle but many are opposed to this scheme. We cannot left behind some part of society who are in need. One of them is students who are asset of the country and going make a country prosperous. People have many opinions regarding assistance to students.
Corona has
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changed
life throughout worldwide.
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Many part
of society has been
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affected
from this pandemic.
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Some
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come
out of it
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but
still
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many
are in need. Country is working on welfare principle
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but
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many
are opposed
to this scheme. We cannot
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left
behind
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some
part of society who are in need. One of them is students who are asset of the country and going
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make
a country prosperous.
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People
have
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many
opinions regarding assistance to students.

IELTS essay Government is giving assistance to students during corona time.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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