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Reasons for going back to live in rural areas

Reasons for going back to live in rural areas 7P76A
I think that rural life is better than urban life. the cost of living is much cheaper in rural areas. People are also more friendly and helpful. I can live in an environment with little or no pollution. The only problem is that people have little access to modern facilities and technology. It is important that the government invest more in rural areas so that people there can have the same opportunities as people in the cities.
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access to modern facilities and technology. It is
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invest more in rural areas
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IELTS essay Reasons for going back to live in rural areas

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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