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Chosen because UNODC works to inform the world about the dangers of drug abuse and to strengthen international action against drug production, trafficking and drug-related crime. Chosen because UNODC works to inform the world about the dangers of drug abuse and to strengthen international action against drug production, trafficking and drug-related crime. Chosen because UNODC works to inform the world about the dangers of drug abuse and to strengthen international action against drug production, trafficking and drug-related crime. Chosen because UNODC works to inform the world about the dangers of drug abuse and to strengthen international action against drug production, trafficking and drug-related crime.
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because
UNODC works to
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inform
the
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world
about the
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dangers
of
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drug
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abuse
and to
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strengthen
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international
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action
against
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drug
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production
, trafficking and drug-related crime.

Chosen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
UNODC works to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inform
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dangers
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
and to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
strengthen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
against
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
, trafficking and drug-related crime.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Chosen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
UNODC works to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inform
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dangers
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
and to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
strengthen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
against
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
, trafficking and drug-related crime.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Chosen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
UNODC works to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inform
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dangers
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
and to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
strengthen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
against
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
, trafficking and drug-related crime.
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IELTS essay reasons for committee choices

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
104 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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