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Every type of information is provided on internet there is no need of museum

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everything
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time
and tradition is
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information
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people
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information
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museums
.
Additionally
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individual
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time
. The noteworthy point is that a person can learn anything about orthodox period at any place or at any
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about the sacrifices of
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IELTS essay Every type of information is provided on internet there is no need of museum

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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