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Is metro the most convenient transportation of metropolis?

Is metro the most convenient transportation of metropolis? XlBb8

Public transportation is so important to every city specially mega cities. Nowadays people are dealing with some problems like traffic congestion particularly in metropolises so it is agreed that not only could subway solve traffic problems but it might also be environmental friendly. Metro as an underground transportation system could reach areas of the city in shortest distance without any traffic problem and also there is no need to much land on the ground and it helps to keep city more beautiful. The other advantage is the fact that subway works by electricity so it will preserve the environment even more the railway is located underground therefore doesn’t have any noise pollution. Overall if a mega city has a developed subway system can resolve various kind of problems like traffic jams and environmental pollution therewith people can take away from transportation stresses save their time and money.

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 save their time and money. 