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reasons and problems of immigration

reasons and problems of immigration 1bqPG

First and foremost, the major reason for this personal choice is the fact that individuals are seeking better opportunities for jobs and studies since their home countries could be having economic predicament and poor education system. In addition, when a person takes this decision, she is looking not only for job satisfaction and a work-life balance but also for a safe place to live with their children, where there will have security and an efficient education system. On the other hand, some difficulties are associated with immigration. The initial problem referred to culture shock due to the difference between new culture and accustomed culture, The difference is felt as soon as you step off the plane. Furthermore, making a quick adjustment is another pressing problem around immigration, It takes you a while to get used to the new culture.

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 and foremost, the major reason for this personal choice is the fact that individuals are seeking better opportunities for jobs and studies since their home countries could be having economic predicament and poor education system. In addition
, when a person takes this decision, she is looking not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for job satisfaction and a work-life balance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for a safe place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with their children, where there will have security and an efficient education system.

On the other hand
,

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some
 difficulties are associated
 with immigration. The initial problem referred to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
 shock due to the difference between new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
 and accustomed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
, The difference is felt
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as you step off the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
. Furthermore
, making a quick adjustment is another pressing problem around immigration, It takes you a while to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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used
 to the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
. 