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Reason behind anti social behaviour among school students. Reason & solution

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Antu social behaviour are the actions which can might harm person, property or society. Anti social behaviour can be like shouting or abusing someone. First reason is negative attitude of a teacher towards student. Student might feel aggressive Secondly, lack of parents love and control. Parents get very busy in there work and donot concentrate on there childern. To keep children busy they are given with their own gadgets like mobile, computer, video games. childern are busy in their mobiles. Thirdly, childrens adopt anti social behaviour by seeing or copying another persons behaviour like actor, models, parents The solution of this problem is that parents should spend time with their childrens. Theachers should show positive attitude towards students.
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Antu
social
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behaviour
are the actions which can might harm person, property or society.
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Anti social
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behaviour
can be like shouting or abusing someone.
First
reason is
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negative
attitude of a teacher towards student. Student might feel aggressive
Secondly
, lack of
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parents
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love
and control.
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Parents
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get
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very
busy in there work and
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donot
concentrate on there
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childern
. To
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keep
children busy they are
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given
with their
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own
gadgets like mobile, computer, video games.
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childern
are busy in their mobiles.
Thirdly
,
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childrens
adopt
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anti social
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behaviour
by seeing or copying another
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persons
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behaviour
like actor, models,
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parents
The solution of this problem is that
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parents
should spend time with their
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childrens
.
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Theachers
should
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show
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positive
attitude towards students.
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IELTS essay Reason behind anti social behaviour among school students. Reason & solution

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  American English
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