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reason and consequence of the migration people

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In the last century, we have been seen a large number of people moving abroad for different and numerous factors. Therefore, the migration have been a arduous and important step for considerable amount of people that by diverse issues as wars, global climate changes or policies economical in their own countries or their homeland, were attracted for the idea of realize this particular and extraordinary change. For this reason I am going to analyses what are the motive and consecutive cost of this crucial decision. Firstly, if the majority of government of these countries would provide prosperity, security for their family, economic opportunities, and a highly quality of life to their inhabitants, they would not choose to leave their homeland. However, the immigration moreover is given for other reason; as in search of more opportunities for the next generation or when a major temporary job in other country leads to settler permanently and in fact, then, the youngest clearly do not want to return. Even though, often several people migrate for exceptional reason due to wars, consequently, the newcomer remain as refugees whom will improve their condition of living and working in new country, considerably better than in their homeland. Secondly, is a enormous opportunity for the host country, inasmuch as it could contribute to improve many factors to new society, for instance, to provide manual workers at the local economic and as a consequence of this, wealthy and prosperity for the nation. Similarly, the new ethnic communities establish cultural ties with the host contributing certainly to combine diverse cultures enriching both, with regard to tradition, trades, language, education and in particular, the way to confront the life. According to my point of view, migration is the social change to large-scale that always have affected the positive or negative notable the whole world, owing to that it is a part of the human history.
In the last century, we have been
seen
a large number of
people
moving abroad for
different
and numerous factors.
Therefore
, the migration have been
a
arduous and
important
step for considerable amount of
people
that by diverse issues as wars, global climate
changes
or policies economical in their
own
countries
or their homeland,
were attracted
for the
idea
of realize this particular and extraordinary
change
.
For this reason
I am going to analyses what are the motive and consecutive cost of this crucial decision.

Firstly
, if the majority of
government
of these
countries
would provide prosperity, security for their family, economic opportunities, and a
highly
quality of life to their inhabitants, they would not choose to
leave
their homeland.
However
, the immigration
moreover
is
given
for other reason; as in search of more opportunities for the
next
generation or when a major temporary job in other
country
leads to settler
permanently
and in fact, then, the youngest
clearly
do not want to return.
Even though
,
often
several
people
migrate for exceptional reason due to wars,
consequently
, the newcomer remain as refugees whom will
improve
their condition of living and working in new
country
,
considerably
better than in their homeland.

Secondly
, is
a
enormous opportunity for the host
country
, inasmuch as it could contribute to
improve
many
factors to new society,
for instance
, to provide manual workers at the local economic and as a consequence of this, wealthy and prosperity for the nation.
Similarly
, the new ethnic communities establish cultural ties with the host contributing
certainly
to combine diverse cultures enriching both, with regard to tradition, trades, language, education and
in particular
, the way to confront the life.

According to my point of view, migration is the social
change
to large-scale that always have
affected
the
positive
or
negative
notable the whole world, owing to that it is a part of the human history.
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IELTS essay reason and consequence of the migration people

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