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my favorite home in my memory

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Aplethora of people dream to have a modern house located in the city, however, I love my house in my peaceful hometown. My house has only 2 floors and is not spacious, on the contrary space in abundance for a family to live costly. My father painted the house blue, which is my favourite colourant the ceiling is beautifully decoratedwith star and moon ornaments. mother loves natural lights rather than artificial lights consequently each room has its own large windows. There is a balcony in my bedroom, where I can enjoy the breathtaking view of the sea every morning. We have a large garden where we plant flowers, which I can’t have if we live in the city. Because I have a job in the city, I only visit my house twice a month. The time I live in my house with my parents is always the best part of my life.
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IELTS essay my favorite home in my memory

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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