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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

: Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. OyVXN
Many people believe that visual information can be conveyed more efficiently than word. For me, I strongly agree with the statement because it is more interesting to enjoy and it delivers the information more easily than reading. To most people, watching an educational video or image is more enjoyable than reading a lecture book. This can be explained as the visual information helps them shape up their imagination. Moreover, peoples brains don’t have to function since pictures or films do all the work for them. As a result, it is often more comfortable to receive the information from the visual sources compared with the ones from books. According to my recent national survey, more and more people are changing their habit from reading newspaper to watching TV as TV has better animation and they can multitask. Another benefit worth mentioning is information delivery. A film with sound effects and moving characters will likely to attract more viewers than a book or piece of information that only has words. Also, photograph or movie can convey the message very fast as it gives people a specific view of its content. . For example, a provincial company in Vietnam has seen a significant increase in sales since their advertising leaflets contained some photos of their products. In conclusion, I fully support the statement above as it is very correct and has clear evidence. Given this, I believe we should use technology to deliver our information.
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believe that visual
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can
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agree
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it is more interesting to enjoy and it delivers the
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more
easily
than reading.

To most
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people
, watching an educational video or image is more enjoyable than reading a lecture book. This can be
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explained
as the visual
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information
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helps
them shape up their imagination.
Moreover
,
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peoples
brains don’t
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have to
function since pictures or films do all the work for them.
As a result
, it is
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often
more comfortable to receive the
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information
from the visual sources compared with the ones from books. According to my recent national survey, more and more
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people
are changing their habit from reading newspaper to watching TV as TV has better
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animation and
they can multitask.

Another benefit worth mentioning is
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information
delivery. A film with sound effects and moving characters will likely to attract more viewers than a book or piece of
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information
that
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only
has words.
Also
, photograph or movie can convey the message
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very
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fast
as it gives
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people
a specific view of its content.
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.
For example
, a provincial
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company
in Vietnam has
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seen
a significant increase in sales since their advertising leaflets contained
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some
photos of their products.

In conclusion
, I
fully
support the statement above as it is
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very
correct and has
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clear
evidence.
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Given
this, I believe we should
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use
technology to deliver our
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information
.
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IELTS essay : Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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