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Ratio of poverty is increasing world wide .what are the reasons for world poverty .what can be done to solve this problem.

Ratio of poverty is increasing world wide. what are the reasons for world poverty. what can be done to solve this problem. VOPD
In this modern era, poverty is burgeoning world wide. There are several reasons behind increasing the poverty in world. This piece of writing shall discuss some causes and some solution to mitigate that problem. To begin with, there are number of reasons behind this. Firstly, the main reason of poverty in countries is unemployment. There are a lot of people who have not any job for earning money and they have not money for spending on their basic items. Moreover, due to the large population it is not possible to provide job to everyone and if might be possible for providing job then the problem of illetracy is faced by the people. poeple do not have knowledge about new modern techniques and gadgets so they cannot do any work because in thie era every work is done by new devices. Furthermore, inflation is one of most biggest problem behind the poverty. Prices of every items either it is grocery or other is rose day day. For a middle class family it is not possible to afford even grocery items for daily need because prices are very high and masses do not have any source (like job) of earning and if they do not have money thay cannot purchase anything and have to face poverty. Moving ahead, there are numerous steps which can be taken for mitigate that problem like, government should provide more job opportunities to youngsters that they can easily handle their rudimentary expenses. By this they can remove their poverty from nations. Moving further, legal bodies should reduce the taxes which are imposed on the several products, so thay can purchase the basic items easily without any financial problem. Additionally, people are considered poor because they do not have money to spend on food or eduction. So government should provide free education and food to the natives of that countries and by this they can reduce the poverty. To conclude, there are a lot of causes that why poverty is increasing day by day like, unemployment, literacy rate and inflation but every problem have solution so this problem also have several solution which can reduce the problems by the help of reducing the rate of government taxes and by job opportunities.
In this modern era,
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poverty
is burgeoning
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world wide
. There are several reasons behind increasing the
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poverty
in world. This piece of writing shall discuss
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some
causes and
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solution to mitigate that problem.

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with, there are number of reasons behind this.
Firstly
, the main reason of
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poverty
in countries is unemployment. There are
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a lot of
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people
who have not any
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job
for earning
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money and
they have not
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money
for spending on their basic
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items
.
Moreover
, due to the large population it is not possible to provide
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job
to everyone and if might be possible for providing
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job
then the
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problem
of
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illetracy
is faced
by the
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people
.
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poeple
do not have knowledge about new modern techniques and gadgets
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so
they cannot do any work
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because
in
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thie
era every work
is done
by new devices.
Furthermore
, inflation is one of
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most biggest
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problem
behind the
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poverty
. Prices of every
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items
either it is grocery or other is rose
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day day
. For a middle
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class
family it is not possible to afford even grocery
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items
for daily need
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because
prices are
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very
high and masses do not have any source (like
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job)
of earning and if they do not have
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money
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thay
cannot
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purchase
anything and
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have to
face poverty.

Moving ahead, there are numerous steps which can
be taken
for mitigate that
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problem
like,
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government
should provide more
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job
opportunities to youngsters that they can
easily
handle their rudimentary expenses. By this they can remove their
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poverty
from nations. Moving
further
, legal bodies should
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reduce
the taxes which
are imposed
on the several products,
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so
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thay
can
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purchase
the basic
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items
easily
without any financial
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problem
.
Additionally
,
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people
are considered
poor
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because
they do not have
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money
to spend on food or
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eduction
.
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So
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government
should provide free education and food to the natives of that countries and by this they can
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reduce
the poverty.

To conclude
, there are
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a lot of
causes that why
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poverty
is increasing day by day like, unemployment, literacy rate and inflation
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but
every
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problem
have solution
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so
this
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problem
also
have
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several solution
which can
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reduce
the
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problems
by the
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help
of reducing the rate of
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government
taxes and by
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job
opportunities.
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IELTS essay Ratio of poverty is increasing world wide. what are the reasons for world poverty. what can be done to solve this problem.

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