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Radio has became outdated

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important
device for listening and entertainment and
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news
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people
had preferred most in the Tout me.
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in Present scenario, folk advocate Role of radio is going to decline
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gadgets
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, the significance of radio is replacing toilet
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new
technology like Smartphone, tablet.
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, I completely
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agree
with the writer's notions, and the Reasons for my inclination
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through in ensuring Paragraphs.

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People
wing
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zalishal
dos prevalent device. These are
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Reasons
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IELTS essay Radio has became outdated

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
120 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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