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Radio has became outdated

Radio has became outdated 3rgb
Some masses would argue that hadis is a important device for listening and entertainment and news and people had preferred most in the Tout me. But in Present scenario, folk advocate Role of radio is going to decline chile the new gadgets avilable, the significance of radio is replacing toilet new technology like Smartphone, tablet. Hence, I completely agree with the writer's notions, and the Reasons for my inclination are articulated through in ensuring Paragraphs. To Commonce within the bowe. do: S, People wing zalishal dos prevalent device. These are tA majak Reasons cathy People Should avail audio and accepted new. technology gadgets. Firstly, people can use Smoot phone and lie dan called a ane paid folia inbuilt In Am plunge
Some
masses would argue that
hadis
is
a
important
device for listening and entertainment and
news
and
people
had preferred most in the Tout me.
But
in Present scenario, folk advocate Role of radio is going to decline
chile
the
new
gadgets
avilable
, the significance of radio is replacing toilet
new
technology like Smartphone, tablet.
Hence
, I completely
agree
with the writer's notions, and the Reasons for my inclination
are articulated
through in ensuring Paragraphs.

To
Commonce
within the
bowe
.
do
: S,
People
wing
zalishal
dos prevalent device. These are
tA
majak
Reasons
cathy
People
Should avail audio and
accepted
new
.
technology
gadgets.
Firstly
,
people
can
use
Smoot
phone and lie
dan
called
a
ane
paid
folia
inbuilt In Am plunge
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IELTS essay Radio has became outdated

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
120 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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