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Recycling is now an essential measure. It is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recycling is now an essential measure. It is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment. with this statement? 6bpj
Over the past decades, environmental protection has been neglected countless of times due to the economic development between nations. Some argues that it is the golden time to take action for environment responsibility and recycling plays an important role as the essential measurement. I strongly agree with the notion that this is the moment to swiftly act to protect our environment, regarding recycling as the vital instrument. On the one hand, the Mother Earth needs human touch of healing because disposable wastes in plastic, tin, and other toxic materials have been thrown in the nature habitats over years back in the day. In other words, Earth people should show no hesitation towards environmental protections. According to recent research findings, there is the link between the health of Earth and human wastes firing, the result shows that the more human wastes are emitting, the more Earth’s health is demising. The experience of disposable wastes using should be controlled by government acts and recycling wastes for the in-time shielding human and environment health. To illustrate, Singapore has proven its implementation is one of the flagship in garbage controlling and recycling in every aspect so the country has reigned one of the cleansest nation worldwide. However, some has the contrast ideas to the essential recycling of wastes, being said that this measurements should be replaced by other possible alternatives. First and foremost, education is fundamental in raising awareness standards and the crowd effects in the longrun; therefore, proper investment in education is regarded as the optimized selection instead of immediate recycling. In addition to education in environmental guarding, improvements in environment-friendly products should be widely advertised and encouraged by authorities in both micro and macro level within a nation. Evidently, the effectiveness in applying the mentioned actions could explicitly oberserve in developed nations. To sum up, educational purposes implied on people should be encouraged and implemented throughout nations but the former idea of recycling, controlling of wastes are accessible.
Over the past decades, environmental protection has
been neglected
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countless of times
due to the economic development between
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nations
.
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Some
argues that it is the golden time to take action for environment responsibility and
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recycling
plays an
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important
role as the essential measurement. I
strongly
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agree
with the notion that this is the moment to
swiftly
act to protect our environment, regarding
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recycling
as the vital instrument.

On the one hand, the Mother
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Earth
needs
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human
touch of healing
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because
disposable
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wastes
in plastic, tin, and other toxic materials have
been thrown
in the nature habitats over years back in the day.
In other words
,
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Earth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
should
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show
no hesitation towards environmental protections. According to recent research findings, there is the link between the health of
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Earth
and
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human
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wastes
firing, the result
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shows
that the more
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human
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wastes
are emitting, the more
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Earth’s
health is demising. The experience of disposable
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wastes
using should
be controlled
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
acts and
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recycling
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wastes
for the in-time shielding
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human
and environment health. To illustrate, Singapore has proven its implementation is one of the flagship in garbage controlling and
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recycling
in every aspect
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so
the country has reigned one of the
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cleansest
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nation
worldwide.

However
,
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some
has the contrast
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ideas
to the essential
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recycling
of
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wastes
,
being said
that
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this
measurements should
be replaced
by other possible alternatives.
First
and foremost, education is fundamental in raising awareness standards and the crowd effects in the
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longrun
;
therefore
, proper investment in education
is regarded
as the optimized selection
instead
of immediate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
In addition
to education in environmental guarding, improvements in environment-friendly products should be
widely
advertised and encouraged by authorities in both micro and macro level within a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
Evidently
, the effectiveness in applying the mentioned actions could
explicitly
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oberserve
in developed nations.

To sum up, educational purposes implied on
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people
should
be encouraged
and implemented throughout
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nations
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but
the former
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idea
of
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recycling
, controlling of
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wastes
are accessible.
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IELTS essay Recycling is now an essential measure. It is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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