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quit your job for 3 month

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i think i will go to australia to work with my uncle for 3 months. because only need to work for 3 months but the salary i get is equivalent to 22 months working in vietnam. i know with such a high salary the job will not be easy but i am a pretty adaptable person, i can live and work in a high pressure environment so i think i will be able to overcome that difficulty. Besides, when I finished 3 months working in Australia, when I returned to Vietnam, I still had the opportunity to continue doing the job that I love. Before I go to Australia I can write a temporary resignation letter, and if they don't accept the temporary leave I am completely willing to start over. although I will probably have to start all over again, but with my previous experience, I think it will be back to the way it was before coming to Australia soon.
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know with such a high salary the job will not be easy
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am a pretty adaptable person,
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will be able to overcome that difficulty.
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working in Australia, when I returned to Vietnam, I
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I go to Australia I can write a temporary resignation letter, and if they don't accept the temporary
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with my previous experience, I
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IELTS essay quit your job for 3 month

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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