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Question Write a report titled MR SANJEEV GUJARAL, CEO MRF DEAD ! in a fatal road accident, at Mosque Road, The first Cross Roads, Frazer Town Bangalore, in approximately 300 words. Guidelines: A horrific road accident - between BMW and ISUZU SX10 – Speeding car and a stationary truck – early hours of this morning - date – place – time – crowd gathers – police arrive – disperse the crowd – investigation – ambulance called - blood and shard of glass strewn everywhere – identity not found - taken to hospital – doctors find identity – the diseased Mr Sanjeeve Gujaral, CEO – MRF –personnel of the company informed – family and friends notified – tearful scene – Mrs. Chitra Gujaral age 28 – only son Rahul age 5 arrive –body handed over - after post mortem - final rights.

Question Write a report titled MR SANJEEV GUJARAL, CEO MRF DEAD! in a fatal road accident, at Mosque Road, The first Cross Roads, Frazer Town Bangalore, in approximately 300 words. Guidelines: A horrific road accident - between BMW and ISUZU SX10 – Speeding car and a stationary truck – early hours of this morning - date – place – time – crowd gathers – police arrive – disperse the crowd – investigation – ambulance called - blood and shard of glass strewn everywhere – identity not found - taken to hospital – doctors find identity – the diseased Mr Sanjeeve Gujaral, CEO – MRF –personnel of the company informed – family and friends notified – tearful scene – Mrs. Chitra Gujaral age 28 – only son Rahul age 5 arrive –body handed over - after post mortem - final rights. 5A9oQ
A horrific road accident took place between a BMW and a ISUZU SX-10 stationary truck in the early hours of this morning at the Mosque road in Fraser town. A crowd gathered around the scene and found the car hit on a tree trying to avoid hitting the truck. The police arrived on the scene and the crowd was dispersed. an ambulance was called. There was blood and shards of glass everywhere and the police were not able to identify the body. The body was taken to the hospital and the doctors found the deceased's purse and identified him to be Mr. Sanjeev Gujaral, the CEO of MRF Tyres. The personnel of the company was called and friends and family were notified. It was a tearful scene. Mrs. Chitra Gujaral, aged 28, and the son, Rahul, aged 5, arrived at the hospital. The body was handed over to them. The funeral will be held the next day. The final rights of the company, as per Mr. Gujaral will, was handed to his son, Rahul. But as he was a minor, Mrs. Gujaral will be appointed as the act-in CEO after the funeral, as she is the legal guardian. Such a tragic event. All our prayers will be with the Gujaral family.
A horrific road accident took place between a BMW and a ISUZU SX-10 stationary truck in the early hours of this morning at the Mosque road in Fraser town. A crowd gathered around the scene and found the car hit on a tree trying to avoid hitting the truck. The police arrived on the scene and the crowd
was dispersed
.
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an
ambulance
was called
. There was blood and shards of glass everywhere and the police were not able to identify the body. The body
was taken
to the hospital and the doctors found the deceased's purse and identified him to be Mr. Sanjeev
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Gujaral
, the CEO of MRF
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Tyres
. The personnel of the
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company
was called
and friends and family
were notified
. It was a tearful scene.
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Mrs
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chitra
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Gujaral
, aged 28, and the son, Rahul, aged 5, arrived at the hospital. The body
was handed
over to them. The funeral will
be held
the
next
day.
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The
final rights of the
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company
, as per Mr.
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Gujaral
will,
was handed
to his son, Rahul.
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But
as he was a minor,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Mrs
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Gujaral
will
be appointed
as the act-in CEO after the funeral, as she is the legal guardian. Such a tragic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. All our prayers will be with the
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Gujaral
family.

IELTS essay Question Write a report titled MR SANJEEV GUJARAL, CEO MRF DEAD! in a fatal road accident, at Mosque Road, The first Cross Roads, Frazer Town Bangalore, in approximately 300 words. Guidelines: A horrific road accident - between BMW and ISUZU SX10 – Speeding car and a stationary truck – early hours of this morning - date – place – time – crowd gathers – police arrive – disperse the crowd – investigation – ambulance called - blood and shard of glass strewn everywhere – identity not found - taken to hospital – doctors find identity – the diseased Mr Sanjeeve Gujaral, CEO – MRF –personnel of the company informed – family and friends notified – tearful scene – Mrs. Chitra Gujaral age 28 – only son Rahul age 5 arrive –body handed over - after post mortem - final rights.

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