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Question nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reason for this? Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Question nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. what are the reason for this? Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages? bYldl

It is irrefutable that metropolitan areas allow People's for better opportunities. youngsters in today's Era migrate to urban areas for education or jobs. although this trend has several drawbacks, I strongly believe that it is for beneficial for adults To begin, there are enormous benefits of this changing trend for migration By young people from the rural area to cities. firstly, moving in the release leads to great opportunities in various sectors. better education system Will be provided to students and more suitable vacancies in the employment sector. to exemplify, towns have the latest technology used for teaching such smart boards. scholarship are given to deserving able students, industries are setting up in Tri-Cities at the greater extent which tends to abundant of employment Moreover, shifting to model towns help individuals to fetch urban lifestyle and self-dependency. they live alone and get experience about an independent lifestyle. Pupils observe western culture followed by urban citizens and try to adopt their culture. Hence population movement results in a better lifestyle and new understandings On the other hand, there are some downsides of moving Well to urban. individuals in rural years are indulged in agriculture which will be wholly extent after migration. youngsters leave farming to get higher education or desk jobs. such as farmers sending their offsprings to study and work abroad. People from rural background move to cities which leads to overpopulation in towns. In conclusion, moving from Area to another has its own pros and cons. based on merits and demerits if resettlement has done it would be beneficial for society

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areas
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allow
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People
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youngsters
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today
's Era migrate to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
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areas
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begin
, there are enormous benefits of this changing trend for migration By young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from the rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 to cities. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
, moving in the release leads to great opportunities in various sectors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBetter
better
 education system Will be provided
 to students and more suitable vacancies in the employment sector. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 exemplify, towns have the latest technology This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for teaching such smart boards. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterScholarship
scholarship
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given
 to deserving able students, industries are setting up in Possible spelling mistake found.Trinities
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Moreover
, shifting to model towns This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 individuals to fetch You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
 lifestyle and self-dependency. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 alone and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 experience about an independent lifestyle. Pupils observe western culture followed by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
 citizens and try to adopt their culture. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
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understandings


On the other hand
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some
 downsides of moving Well to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdowntowncivilmetropolitancivic
urban
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIndividuals
individuals
 in rural years are indulged
 in agriculture which will be wholly extent after migration. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYoungsters
youngsters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 farming to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 higher education or desk jobs. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuch
such
 as farmers sending their Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "offspring", the plural form of the noun 'offspring'?offspringoff springs
offsprings
 to study and work abroad. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 from rural background This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to cities which leads to overpopulation in towns.

In conclusion
, moving from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
Area
 to another has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 pros and cons. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBased
based
 on merits and demerits if resettlement has done it would be beneficial for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsociety.society!society?society:society,society;
society