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queen tribute to the fall

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Reading just some of the wonderful memories you have shared about your experiences of the Duke of Edinburgh’s Award and, in some cases, of meeting my father, has been truly uplifting. I think I may have said once that he was a man that once met, never forgotten. He had a unique ability to make a lasting impression in a remarkably short time. I, like all my family, have a lifetime of lasting impressions, inspiration, shared passions and love. He may have departed this world, but his spirit and ethos lives on through his Award, through each and every life touched, transformed, inspired; then, now and in the future. Thank you one and all for helping to create such an extraordinary tribute.
Reading
just
some of the
wonderful memories you have shared about your experiences of the Duke of Edinburgh’s Award and, in
some
cases, of meeting my father, has been
truly
uplifting. I
think
I may have said once that he was a
man
that once met, never forgotten.

He had a unique ability to
make
a lasting impression in a
remarkably
short time. I, like all my family, have a lifetime of lasting impressions, inspiration, shared passions and
love
. He may have departed this world,
but
his spirit and ethos
lives
on through his Award, through each and every life touched, transformed, inspired; then,
now
and in the future. Thank you one and all for helping to create such an extraordinary tribute.
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IELTS essay queen tribute to the fall

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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