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Quality to maintain Friendship

Quality to maintain Friendship Mr8Ka
Humans are born in a society, not only this but we are also social animals. We love to communicate and build connection. There are many different types of relationship that a person can encounter in life one of which is friendship. Other than our parents this kind of bond is build at a very young age. We might not remenber our first friend but as we grow we develop more of this attraction. There are factors that humans subconciously have as a guideline to what makes or breaks a relationship. Building a great connection is consists of caring for others, however, having an inefficient relationship comes from being ignorance. To strengthen a connection we must care and treat others nicely. Little things are very important, putting our attention towards what their likes and dislikes are is the key to understanding. When we are with someone that cares about these minor things, it makes us want to spend more time with them. We should treat people the same way we want to be treated. Saying things that will not hurt anyone's feeling or doing anything that will make them upset. Doing so will allow them to open up and trust us. Bond are usually broken because of disagreement and ignorance. It might not be easy to communicate when there are differences, for example, having an opposite opinion on a topic. This might create discomfort or awkardness, nevertheless, this obstacle is easy to overcome if we choose to adjust our egos. It is best to speak to each other when there is an issue, ignoring a problem can be really harmful towards the other person. It might have a negative impact on the other person's feeling. Some of the best bond that we have in our lives are from our friends. The pointer that indicate whether a relationship is strong or weak depends on how much effort we put into building the bond. Are we adjusting ourselves and trying to undertsand them or are we doing things to constantly hurt their feelings. We should consider our acttion towards our pals in order to have a relationship that is benefitcial to both.
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we are
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social animals. We
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love
to communicate and build connection. There are
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many
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different
types of
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relationship
that a person can encounter in life one of which is friendship.
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Other
than our parents this kind of bond is build at a
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very
young age. We
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might
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remenber
our
first
friend
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but
as we grow we develop more of this attraction. There are factors that humans
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subconciously
have as a guideline to what
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makes
or breaks a
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relationship
. Building a great connection is consists of caring for others,
however
, having an inefficient
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relationship
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comes
from being ignorance.

To strengthen a connection we
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must
care and treat others
nicely
.
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Little
things are
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very
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important
, putting our attention towards what their likes and dislikes are is the key to understanding. When we are with someone that cares about these minor things, it
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makes
us want to spend more time with them. We should treat
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people
the same way we want to
be treated
. Saying things that will not hurt anyone's feeling or doing anything that will
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make
them upset. Doing
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will
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allow
them to open up and trust us.

Bond are
usually
broken
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because
of disagreement and ignorance. It
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might
not be easy to communicate when there are differences,
for example
, having an opposite opinion on a topic. This
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might
create discomfort or
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awkardness
,
nevertheless
, this obstacle is easy to overcome if we choose to adjust our egos. It is best to speak to each
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other
when there is an issue, ignoring a problem can be
really
harmful towards the
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other
person. It
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might
have a
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negative
impact on the
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other
person's feeling.

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Some
of the best bond that we have in our
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lives
are from our friends. The pointer that indicate whether a
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relationship
is strong or weak depends on how much effort we put into building the bond. Are we adjusting ourselves and trying to
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undertsand
them or are we doing things to
constantly
hurt their feelings. We should consider our
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acttion
towards our pals in order to have a
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relationship
that is
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benefitcial
to both.
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IELTS essay Quality to maintain Friendship

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
359 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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