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quakers noises and argument between former and passage

quakers noises and argument between former and passage YyVV5

Quakers are noises that remind the submarine crews of frog croaks. Both the lecture and the reading talk about theories related to these sounds. The former says it is still challenging to know what the cause of these sounds, while the latter emphasizes three theories about what might have caused the Quakers. To begin with, the first theory of what might have caused these sounds is connected with the calls of male and female orca whales. The instructor attacks this theory. In fact, she mentions that orca whales could not be the reason for the sounds because they are living near to the surface of the ocean, not deep. All the odd sounds are coming from the deep ocean and if the sounds come from the whales the sonar should easily detect them. However, the passage claims that the sounds of whales when they are trying to attract a mate are the same as strange noises. Moreover, the discussion transitioned into the giant squid that could produce these sounds. The professor sees this point differently. She believes that Russian started to hear these sounds from the 1960s and for some reason these sounds are over but there are still a lot of squid. She adds there is no reason why the giant squid made this noise for one decade and then stopped suddenly. On the other hand, the author highlights that giant squid are living deep in the ocean and it is very hard to detect them because they have soft bodies with no skeleton. Last but not least, the final argument about these sounds revolve around another country's submarines. The speaker is challenged with this idea. She points out that there is no technology that is able to do this type of submarines because they move very fast. Nevertheless, the paragraph introduces that the foreign submarines did not register on the sonar because they used a kind of technology to not be detectable.

Quakers are noises that remind the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarine
 crews of frog croaks. Both the lecture and the reading talk about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcodedoctrineargumentconceptthesissystem
theories
 related to these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
. The former says it is still
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to know
 what the cause of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
, while the latter emphasizes three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcodedoctrineargumentconceptthesissystem
theories
 about what might have caused the Quakers.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the first
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theory
 of what might have caused these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
is connected
 with the calls of male and female orca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
. The instructor attacks this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcodedoctrineargumentconceptthesissystem
theory
. In fact, she mentions that orca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 could not be the reason for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are living near to the surface of the ocean, not deep. All the odd You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
 are coming from the deep ocean and if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 the sonar should easily
 detect them. However
, the passage claims that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmammalporpoise
whales
 when they are trying to attract a mate are the same as strange noises.

Moreover
, the discussion transitioned into the giant squid that could produce these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
. The professor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
 this point differently
. She believes that Russian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to hear these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
 from the 1960s and for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reason these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
 are over This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are still
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a lot of
 squid. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 there is no reason why the giant squid made this noise for one decade and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
suddenly
. On the other hand
, the author highlights that giant squid are living deep in the ocean and it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to detect them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have soft bodies with no skeleton.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, the final argument about these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
 revolve around another country's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
. The speaker is challenged
 with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. She points out that there is no technology that is
 able to do this type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
. Nevertheless
, the paragraph introduces that the foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
 did not register on the sonar This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 a kind of technology to not be detectable. 