Due to their efficiency, the machines have taken the lead over some massive industries worldwide, but there are also a minority of enterprises who don’t utilize them in the process. However, man-made product is more likely to consume time and often being the most expensive in its tier. As a normal consumer, I prefer the ones made by machines rather than spending more cash on original man-made products, and I will critically explain my reasons.
To begin with, industrialized products made by such technologies tend to have less failure in the process, so the quality of each product is adequate for each others. Industrious companies like Adidas and Nike for example, their means of utilizing technologies supported them to become the most well-known sports brands world wide. The majority of people who bought their shoes would never argue over the brands’ standards, yet they became addicted.
Secondly, they are considerably cheaper in terms of price. The ones made by human skills are relatively rare, which in turn boosted their price, and sometimes they are unattainable for some society. Production assisted by sophisticated devices is the most effective, they could efficiently manufacture things which are impossible for human hands, and they could produce a plethora of them. The unlimited amount will not boost its attractiveness, but it could be cheaply retailed in the society.
In a nutshell, machines made products affordable and it’s probably the best option for customers, yet if they still are demanding over the man-made ones, we have no rights to prevent them.
Due to their efficiency, the machines have taken the lead over
some
massive industries worldwide,
but
there are
also
a minority of enterprises who don’t utilize them in the process.
However
,
man
-made
product
is more likely to consume time and
often
being the most expensive in its tier. As a normal consumer, I prefer the
ones
made by machines
rather
than spending more cash on original
man
-made
products
, and I will
critically
explain
my reasons.
To
begin
with, industrialized
products
made by such technologies tend to have less failure in the process,
so
the quality of each
product
is adequate for each
others
. Industrious
companies
like Adidas and Nike
for example
, their means of utilizing technologies supported them to become the most well-known sports brands
world wide
. The majority of
people
who
bought
their shoes would never argue over the brands’ standards,
yet
they became addicted.
Secondly
, they are
considerably
cheaper in terms of price. The
ones
made by human
skills
are
relatively
rare, which in turn boosted their price, and
sometimes
they are unattainable for
some
society. Production assisted by sophisticated devices is the most effective, they could
efficiently
manufacture things which are impossible for human hands, and they could produce a plethora of them. The unlimited amount will not boost its attractiveness,
but
it could be
cheaply
retailed in the society.
In a nutshell, machines made
products
affordable and it’s
probably
the best option for customers,
yet
if they
still
are demanding over the
man
-made
ones
, we have no rights to
prevent
them.
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