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From an early age, I always had keen interest in the electronic equipment. I used to open up and explore different electronic toys but could never fix them back. I used to take out electrical components such as motors, lightbulbs, and speakers from broken toys and sometime use them in other toys. With the time and growing up process I was fascinated by how the technology in the field of electronics is rapidly changing and had huge impact in making our daily lives easier whether its generation and transfer of electricity, or designing of a simple electronic circuit to designing computer and control systems and latest smartphones and space shuttles, advancement in the field of electronics engineering has played a very important role in making our life easier. Thus my personal interest and curiosity in the field was main motivation to learn about the field. After completing my high school education in pre-engineering, I joined NCUK programme because it provided me with the platform to prepare myself for UK education while completing first year of bachelor’s degree in Pakistan and graduate from one of the partner universities of NCUK programme. I graduated with BEng hons Electrical & Electronics Engineering from University of Bradford with 21 second class first division in 2015. After completing bachelors, I wanted to take a break from my studies for some time but the break became unexpectedly long as I was looking after the construction of our home in the village and then in the city while my family was living abroad in UAE. This was further delayed by uncertainty due to covi-19 situation. I believe this gap proved very valuable to me as it helped me communicate with different people and improve my communication and social skills which I was extremely weak in. During this time, I also got the opportunity to work as a consultant in solar company and later as a site engineer at MAC Builders but doing masters was always on my plan so I kept going over my university courses from time to time. I have chosen to study Master’s Program in the United Kingdom because due although the quality of education offered by academic institutions in Pakistan has improved noticeably over the years but specially in th field of engineering it relies heavily on theoretical knowledge rather than practical knowledge and laboratory work that is provided in UK universities. I believe doing a master’s degree from UK will not only increase my in-depth knowledge and understanding of the field but it will also make my qualification recognized by organizations like Washington Accord and PEC Pakistan Engineering Council and give me a competitive edge in the industry. I chose this specific programme at University of. because I like the course offered in the program I have deep interest in courses like industrial and that which will give. I was also impressed by the response from university team which answered my queries in detail and in no time. It is also affordable. I am confident that after getting education from University that provides quality education I will be well equipped to join the industry after returning back to Pakistan. Looking forward for a positive response from your end.
From an early age, I always had keen interest in the
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electronic
equipment. I
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used
to open up and explore
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different
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electronic
toys
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but
could never
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fix
them back. I
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used
to take out electrical components such as motors,
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lightbulbs
, and speakers from broken toys and sometime
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use
them in other toys. With the
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time
and growing up process I
was fascinated
by how the technology in the
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field
of electronics is
rapidly
changing and had huge impact in making our daily
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lives
easier whether its generation and transfer of electricity, or designing of a simple
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electronic
circuit to designing computer and control systems and latest smartphones and space shuttles, advancement in the
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field
of electronics
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engineering
has played a
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very
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important
role in making our life easier.
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Thus
my personal interest and curiosity in the
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field
was main motivation to learn about the field.

After completing my high school
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education
in
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pre-engineering
, I
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joined
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NCUK
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programme
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because
it provided me with the platform to prepare myself for UK
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education
while completing
first
year of bachelor’s degree in Pakistan and graduate from one of the partner
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universities
of
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NCUK
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programme
. I graduated with
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BEng
hons Electrical & Electronics
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Engineering
from
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University
of Bradford with 21 second
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class
first
division in 2015.

After completing bachelors, I wanted to take a break from my studies for
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some
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time
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but
the break became
unexpectedly
long as I was looking after the construction of our home in the village and then in the city while my family was living abroad
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in UAE
. This was
further
delayed by uncertainty due to covi-19 situation. I believe this gap proved
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very
valuable to me as it
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helped
me communicate with
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different
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people
and
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improve
my communication and social
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skills
which I was
extremely
weak in. During this
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time
, I
also
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got
the opportunity to work as a consultant in solar
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company
and later as a site engineer at MAC Builders
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but
doing masters was always on my plan
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so
I
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kept
going over my
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university
courses from
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time
to time.

I have chosen to study Master’s Program in the United Kingdom
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because
due although the quality of
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education
offered by academic institutions in Pakistan has
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improved
noticeably
over the years
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but
specially
in
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th
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field
of
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engineering
it relies
heavily
on theoretical knowledge
rather
than practical knowledge and laboratory work that
is provided
in UK
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universities
. I believe doing a master’s degree from UK will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
increase my in-depth knowledge and understanding of the
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field
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but
it will
also
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make
my qualification recognized by organizations like Washington Accord and PEC Pakistan
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Engineering
Council and give me a competitive edge in the industry.

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I
chose this specific
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programme
at
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University
of.
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because
I like the course offered in the program I have deep interest in courses like industrial and that which will give.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was
also
impressed by the response from
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university
team which answered my queries in detail and in no
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time
. It is
also
affordable. I am confident that after getting
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education
from
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University
that provides quality
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education
I will be
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well equipped
to
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join
the industry after
Consider using "returning".
returning back
to Pakistan.

Looking forward for a
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positive
response from your
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end
.
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IELTS essay purpose of study in uk and abroad

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
536 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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