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punishments helps the children to find difference between right or wrong

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Punishments are crucial for children to know the variation between right and wrong at a young age. It will use to find the difference. I agree that punishments help to put the children in the right direction. To begin with, the fear of punishment encourages the students to stay away from wrongdoings, and hence, they will not get into a problem with their teachers or friends. This will make school life free from any issues and confrontations. For instance, the kid was punished for stealing a pencil from his or her classmate because of the embarrassment he got by punishing he will unlikely to do that in the future. When the kid grows as an adult do the right things and stay away from wrong things because of the lessons learned in childhood. These values will be imparted to their children as well. Overall, society will be benefited from this kind of people. Moreover, the punishments should not be severe. The punishments should be like make feel responsible and should learn from mistakes as well as identify right or wrong things. For example, parents should cancel outings or not buy gifts for birthdays as a result children realize from mistakes and apologize immediately with a promise of behaving better. Teachers should give impositions or make them sit in class during physical periods. Therefore, these kinds of penalties help in raising responsible children. In conclusion, implanting disciplinary actions not only helps to distinguish right or wrong but also trains them to become responsible members of society.
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encourages the students to stay away from wrongdoings, and
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for stealing a pencil from
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classmate
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because
of the embarrassment he
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by punishing he will unlikely to do that in the future. When the kid grows as an adult do the
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things and stay away from
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things
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of the lessons learned in childhood. These values will
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feel responsible and should learn from mistakes
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gifts for birthdays
as a result
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children
realize from mistakes and apologize immediately with a promise of behaving better. Teachers should give impositions or
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them sit in
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during physical periods.
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trains them to become responsible members of society.
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IELTS essay punishments helps the children to find difference between right or wrong

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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