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Public transportation in the city pros and cons

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Introduction The main targets of the following report are to introduce present situation concerning the usage of public transport and suggest potential facilities to improve these kind of services. Current statistics I've conducted a survey encompassing random Russians recently which could help realise the volume of transport users and their attitude to provided vehicles. As a result it turned out that over 15% use public transport frequently. They do it precisely to get to work in the morning and mostly for the reason of absence of any alternative. The rested part is focused on saving money as prices for oil fuel are too large, especially due to the daily utilization. Somebody gets used to such way of existance but the overall majority is complaining on arranged conditions among wich are overcrowded vagons and careless driving. Personal experience Own behalf, I also use public transport rather often or passing courses of spending leisure time in the centre on the weekends. The preferable mean is the underground as I am comfortable with the price and with navigation while using it. I am pleased, generally, although I hate rush hours in the weekdays.

Introduction

The main targets of the following report are to introduce present situation concerning the usage of public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
 and suggest potential facilities to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of services.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
Current
 statistics

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help
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realise
 the volume of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
 users and their attitude to provided vehicles. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result it turned out that over 15% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
frequently
. They do it precisely
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to work in the morning and mostly
 for the reason of absence of any alternative. The rested part is focused
 on saving money as prices for oil fuel are too large, especially
 due to the daily utilization. Somebody This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
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used
 to such way of Possible spelling mistake found.existence
existance
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but
 the overall
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are overcrowded
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vagons
 and careless driving.

Personal experience

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Own
 behalf, I also
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use
 public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
rather
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often
 or passing courses of spending leisure time in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 on the weekends. The preferable mean is the underground as I am comfortable with the price and with navigation while using it. I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
, generally
, although I hate rush hours in the weekdays. 