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Number of participating student in sports

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Looking at the latter half of decade, swimming and running witnessed a opposite side change in the popularity. Whereas swimming began fall steadily from 50 student in 2006 to around 25 students in 2011, running continued to rise. Football participates preserve its popularity. In additional, the significant change is on the number of basketball participates that experienced suddenly decline from about 61 to 20.

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IELTS essay Number of participating student in sports

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

64 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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