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Number of participating student in sports

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Looking at the latter half of decade, swimming and running witnessed a opposite side change in the popularity. Whereas swimming began fall steadily from 50 student in 2006 to around 25 students in 2011, running continued to rise. Football participates preserve its popularity. In additional, the significant change is on the number of basketball participates that experienced suddenly decline from about 61 to 20.
Looking at the latter half of decade, swimming and running witnessed
a
opposite side
change
in the popularity. Whereas swimming began fall
steadily
from 50
student
in 2006 to around 25 students in 2011, running continued to rise. Football participates preserve its popularity. In additional, the significant
change
is on the number of basketball participates that experienced
suddenly
decline from about 61 to 20.
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IELTS essay Number of participating student in sports

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
64 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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