Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Public Services of Uzbekistan: Meritocratic principles on practice.

Public Services of Uzbekistan: Meritocratic principles on practice. 2rkAX
When any government aims to build strong political machinery which is optimal, works efficiently and targets a specific goal, the government needs to establish a system that is fair for every citizen. Any development and public reform will remain as theory on paper until there is a limited number of well-qualified specialists with strong vision and motivation. The responsibility of managing and developing Human Resources is given to the Agency for the Development of Public Service Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan. Further improvement of the well-developed solid legal framework governing the activities of public administration bodies, rational distribution of duties, powers and responsibilities between structures, setting specific qualification requirements based on each level of position, uniform, open and transparent access to civil service for all Achieving access to public service through a transparent mechanism, educating, training, retraining, gradual promotion, decent pay, protection of legitimate interests are among the issues facing us. There are initial achievements on the system that is established by the agency. Currently, more than 30 ministries and organizations as well as their regional branches connected to the Agency’s website https: //vacancy. argos. uz/ and they fully transferred to the system of hiring employees by open job competitions. In Kashkadarya region, until now 184 vacancies of governmental organizations and their branches were announced. Around 1500 citizens participated in these open competitions. Amongst these candidates, 90 of them were chosen as a winner due to their strong knowledge, academic background, work experience and qualification by the commissions of the job competitions. Citizens who are considered as a person in need and entered the " Yoshlar daftari" which means "Youth copybook", took part in such competitions and were chosen as a winner and started their career from prestigious organizations such as hakimiyat, ministries and their regional branches and so on. According to the results of the competitions, B. Tutashov was chosen as the most suitable candidate for the leading specialist of Guzar district khokimiyat. In addition, other citizens, A. Muhammadiyev and A. Kadirov, hired by the Ministry of Agriculture of the Republic of Uzbekistan. Many examples can be shown in this field. Currently, sixty vacancies on the process while 40 vacancies of the ministries, hakimiyats and organizations such as Koson region hakimiyat, Guzor region Hokimiyat, Muborak region hakimiyat and Shakhrisabz city hakimiyat, a regional branch of Ministry of Public Education, regional branch of Ministry of Preschool education, regional branch of Ministry of Finance, regional branch of Ministry of culture, a regional branch of Ministry of Employment and Labor Relations and others. Around 1300 citizens are going to check their knowledge by taking part in competitions. Simply saying, a target of the competitions on vacancies is giving equal chances to both citizens who live in very far villages and cities of Uzbekistan and who live in city centres. Another aim of this project is to attract more well-qualified, motivated and knowledgeable specialists to the Public services and enhancing the reputation of Public Services. Authors: Tuychi Yokubov – Deputy Chief of Kashkadarya regional branch of Agency for the Development of Public Service Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan Aziza Saidova- inspector of Kashkadarya regional branch of Agency for the Development of Public Service Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan
When any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
aims to build strong political machinery which is optimal, works
efficiently
and targets a specific goal, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
needs to establish a system
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
for every citizen.

Any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
reform will remain as theory on paper until there is a limited number of well-qualified specialists with strong vision and motivation.

The responsibility of managing and developing Human Resources is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Agency
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Development
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan.

Further
improvement of the well-developed solid legal framework governing the activities of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
administration bodies, rational distribution of duties, powers and responsibilities between structures, setting specific qualification requirements based on each level of position, uniform, open and transparent access to civil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
for all Achieving access to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
through a transparent mechanism, educating, training, retraining, gradual promotion, decent pay, protection of legitimate interests are among the issues facing us.

There are initial achievements on the system that
is established
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
agency
.
Currently
, more than 30 ministries and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organizations
as well
as their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branches
connected to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Agency’s
website
Possible spelling mistake found.
https
: //vacancy.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
argos
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
uz
/ and they
fully
transferred to the system of hiring employees by open job competitions.

In
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kashkadarya
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
region
, until
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
184
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacancies
of governmental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organizations
and their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branches
were announced
. Around 1500
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
participated in these open
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
.
Do not mix variants of the same word ('amongst' and 'among') within a single text.
Amongst
these candidates, 90 of them
were chosen
as a winner due to their strong knowledge, academic background, work experience and qualification by the commissions of the job competitions.

Citizens who
are considered
as a person in need and entered the
Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbol
"
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yoshlar
Possible spelling mistake found.
daftari
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
which means
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Youth copybook
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
took part
in such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
and
were chosen
as a winner and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
their career from prestigious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organizations
such as
Possible spelling mistake found.
hakimiyat
, ministries and their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branches
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. According to the results of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
, B.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tutashov
was chosen
as the most suitable candidate for the leading specialist of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Guzar
district
Possible spelling mistake found.
khokimiyat
.

In addition
, other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
, A.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Muhammadiyev
and A.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kadirov
, hired by the Ministry of Agriculture of the Republic of Uzbekistan.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
examples can
be shown
in this field.

Currently
, sixty
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacancies
on the process while 40
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacancies
of the ministries,
Possible spelling mistake found.
hakimiyats
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organizations
such as
Possible spelling mistake found.
Koson
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
region
Possible spelling mistake found.
hakimiyat
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Guzor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
region
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hokimiyat
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Muborak
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
region
Possible spelling mistake found.
hakimiyat
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Shakhrisabz
city
Possible spelling mistake found.
hakimiyat
, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of Ministry of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
Education,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of Ministry of Preschool education,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of Ministry of Finance,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of Ministry of culture, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of Ministry of Employment and Labor Relations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
. Around 1300
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
are going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
their knowledge by taking part in competitions.

Simply
saying, a target of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacancies
is giving equal chances to both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
far villages and cities of Uzbekistan and who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
. Another aim of this project is to attract more well-qualified, motivated and knowledgeable specialists to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
and enhancing the reputation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
Services.

Authors:

Possible spelling mistake found.
Tuychi
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yokubov
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
Deputy Chief of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kashkadarya
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Agency
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Development
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan

Possible spelling mistake found.
Aziza
Possible spelling mistake found.
Saidova
- inspector of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kashkadarya
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branch
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Agency
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Development
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Under the President of the Republic of Uzbekistan
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Public Services of Uzbekistan: Meritocratic principles on practice.

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
543 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts