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A portion of society believes that the type of clothes a person wears reflects his/her personality and culture.

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A portion of society believes that the type of clothes a person wears reflects his/her personality and culture. While I do believe that way of clothing can tell a lot about a person's belief, immediately stereotyping and judging a person's character based on clothing should not be done. It is irrefutable that a person's attire can his/her tradition and cultural belief. As in many cultures, the dressing is done according to the occasion, as a fixed dress code was already framed by their ancestors for different events a long time ago. For example, In Hindus, at the death ceremony, attendees dress in all white to show their condolence. Based on these differences in clothing, a person's culture and tradition can stand out from others. However, forming an image by judging the person based on his/her clothes can sometimes lead to the wrong perception as there may be a rich heart under a poor coat. For instance, former prime minister of India Dr Abdul kalam always wears a simple light coloured suit but after listening to his speech one can know how intelligent, wise and selfless he was.
A portion of society believes that the type of clothes a person wears reflects his/her personality and culture. While I do believe that way of clothing can
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person's
belief, immediately stereotyping and judging a
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character based on clothing should not
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.

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person's
attire can his/her tradition and cultural belief. As in
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many
cultures, the dressing
is done
according to the occasion, as a
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fixed
dress code was already framed by their ancestors for
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different
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events
a long time ago.
For example
, In Hindus, at the death ceremony, attendees dress in all white to
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show
their condolence. Based on these differences in clothing, a
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person's
culture and tradition can stand out from others.

However
, forming an image by judging the person based on his/her clothes can
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sometimes
lead to the
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wrong
perception as there may be a rich heart under a poor coat.
For instance
, former prime minister of India Dr Abdul
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kalam
always wears a simple light
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coloured
suit
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after listening to his speech one can know how intelligent, wise and selfless he was.
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IELTS essay A portion of society believes that the type of clothes a person wears reflects his/her personality and culture.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
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