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public manufactur developed

public manufactur developed N8p5m

Modern towns and cities have been developed comprehensively to serve not only as living places for communities but also centers of culture and art. Thus, governmental investment in city aesthetics is sometimes considered necessary to enhance life quality. However, this essay argues that aesthetic facilities, despite their fair importance, should not be the dominant priority of municipal investment.

Modern towns and cities have been developed
comprehensively
 to serve not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 as living places for communities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 centers of culture and art. Thus
, governmental investment in city aesthetics is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 considered necessary to enhance life quality. However
, this essay argues that aesthetic facilities, despite their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 importance, should not be the dominant priority of municipal investment. 

IELTS essay public manufactur developed

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

58 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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