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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as al facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries only existing online.

It is evident that the explosion of Science and Information technology has revolutionized every aspect of this world. Apparently, it has made it very easy to access any information within seconds. Due to this fact, it is predicted that public libraries will be easily available in houses because of effective online access. Although, it will bring productivity benefits, but overlooking its demerits also seems irrelevant. It is generally observed that a huge book collection for the public is being provided online by which not only time, but also money can be saved, whereas existing public book centres are considered as time and money consuming. For example, because of having hectic schedules, one can easily either read or download the books in which one has an interest without putting more efforts. Besides this, nowadays, a lot of advanced and international books are being published which are quick to be picked up only by online assistance. So, this facility offers readers to explore their knowledge on a large level, which takes longer time in case of traditional information centres. In regard to its darker side, it will not be possible for every place, especially the areas where internet services are still not launched. In these situations only traditional information centres can play a significant role as compared to online public book centres. Additionally, this approach demands skills to operate a computer and access internet in convenient ways which is not a cup of tea for every person. In that case, readers have to depend on writing book collections. It is not an exaggeration to say that the actual taste can be felt by reading written material as it is considered as a hobby by many book lovers. So, if only online public libraries will be provided then to some extent, people will be deprived from the reading motive. In conclusion, although, due to advancement, public libraries will be shifted to online facilities, but it will not be on a whole because the significance of existing public library facility cannot be put aside.
It is evident that the explosion of Science and
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Information
technology has revolutionized every aspect of this world.
Apparently
, it has made it
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very
easy to access any
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information
within seconds. Due to this fact, it
is predicted
that
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public
libraries will be
easily
available in
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houses
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because
of effective
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online
access. Although, it will bring productivity benefits,
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but
overlooking its demerits
also
seems irrelevant.

It is
generally
observed that a huge
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book
collection for the
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public
is
being provided
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online
by which not
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only
time,
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but
also
money can
be saved
, whereas existing
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public
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book
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centres
are considered
as time and money consuming.
For example
,
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because
of having hectic schedules, one can
easily
either read or download the
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books
in which one has an interest without putting more efforts.
Besides
this, nowadays,
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a lot of
advanced and international
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books
are
being published
which are quick to
be picked
up
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only
by
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online
assistance.
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So
, this facility offers readers to explore their knowledge on a large level, which takes longer time in case of traditional
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information
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centres
.

In regard to its darker side, it will not be possible for every place,
especially
the areas where internet services are
still
not launched. In these situations
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only
traditional
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information
Possible spelling mistake. ‘centres’ is British English.
centres
can play a significant role as compared to
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online
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public
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book
Possible spelling mistake. ‘centres’ is British English.
centres
.
Additionally
, this approach demands
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skills
to operate a computer and access internet in convenient ways which is not a cup of tea for every person.
In that case
, readers
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have to
depend on writing
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book
collections. It is not an exaggeration to say that the actual taste can
be felt
by reading written material as it
is considered
as a hobby by
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many
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book
lovers.
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So
, if
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only
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online
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public
libraries will
be provided
then to
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some
extent,
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people
will be
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deprived from
the reading motive.

In conclusion
, although, due to advancement,
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public
libraries will
be shifted
to
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online
facilities,
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but
it will not be on a whole
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because
the significance of existing
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public
library facility cannot
be put
aside.
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IELTS essay Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as al facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries only existing online.

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