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Public libraries are no longer required because of the internet

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It is often argued that public libraries have become redundant because of the easy availability of information online. However, I totally disagree with this idea. It is true that all information known to the mankind is now available on the internet. Internet accessibility has also improved over the years. However, this does not mean that public libraries are no longer needed. Libraries are much more than mere access points for books and information. They serve some other purposes as well. For example, libraries provide a quiet environment where one can read and learn. Distractions of everyday life can kill the joy of reading. Libraries offer a solution to this problem. Also, when you are in an environment where everyone is reading, you will also be motivated to get your reading done. This may not be possible at home, even if you can find the same reading material online. The internet is a vast pool of information but if you don’t know what you are looking for, it is nearly impossible to find relevant information online. Libraries, on the other hand, make research easier by grouping books on a particular topic together. Even if you don’t know anything about a given topic, you will still be able to find relevant information on that topic. Today’s libraries also provide access to computers and tablets so that users can search online if they need more information on a topic. Internet accessibility may have improved over the years, but there are still millions of people who do not have access to the internet. Public libraries are the only sources of information for them. If libraries were to die, they would be in trouble. To conclude, despite the existence of all information online, libraries are still important because they provide an environment conducive to reading and learning.
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argued that public libraries have become redundant
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because
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online
.
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It is true that all
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information
known to the mankind is
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now
available on the internet. Internet accessibility has
also
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improved
over the years.
However
, this does not mean that public libraries are no longer needed.

Libraries are much more than mere access points for books and
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information
. They serve
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some
other purposes
as well
.
For example
, libraries provide a quiet environment where one can read and learn. Distractions of everyday life can kill the joy of
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reading
. Libraries offer a solution to this problem.
Also
, when you are in an environment where everyone is
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reading
, you will
also
be motivated
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get
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reading
done. This may not be possible at home, even if you can find the same
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reading
material online.

The internet is a vast pool of
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information
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but
if you don’t know what you are looking for, it is
nearly
impossible to find relevant
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information
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online
. Libraries,
on the other hand
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make
research easier by grouping books on a particular topic together. Even if you don’t know anything about a
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topic, you will
still
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provide access to computers and tablets
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that users can search
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online
if they need more
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information
on a topic.

Internet accessibility may have
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improved
over the years,
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but
there are
still
millions of
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people
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only
sources of
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information
for them. If libraries were to
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, they would be in trouble.

To conclude
, despite the existence of all
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, libraries are
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because
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IELTS essay Public libraries are no longer required because of the internet

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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