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Providing electricity through solar panels

Providing electricity through solar panels 53nAe
There are many ways to provide electricity flow through consumers` houses. One of the ways facilitated in the modern days is through solar panels. The image shows how solar energy is transformed into elecrical energy. Multiple solar panels accumulate the energy of the sun, converting the stored energy into DC current through the wire. Transforming DC current to AC current is carried out by inverter. Inverter is also the part of the structure that controls the electricity and it`s production. The conducted AC current is then conveyed to the electrical panel which distributes the electricity to consumers. In the case consumer`s consumption amount exceeds the amount of electricity produced by the solar panels utility grid provides additional electricity. On the other hand if the amount of electicity consumption is less than what is provided by the solar panels excess solar electricity will flow back to utility meter. In conclusion solar panels are great and safe way of providing electricity to consumers.
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ways to provide
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electricity
flow through
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consumers`
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houses
. One of the ways facilitated in the modern days is through
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solar
panels.

The image
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shows
how
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solar
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energy
is transformed
into
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elecrical
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energy
. Multiple
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solar
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panels
accumulate the
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energy
of the sun, converting the stored
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energy
into DC
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current
through the wire. Transforming DC
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current
to AC
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current
is carried
out by inverter.

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also
the part of the structure that controls the
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electricity
and
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it`s
production. The conducted AC
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current
is then conveyed to the electrical
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panel
which distributes the
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electricity
to
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consumers
. In the case
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consumption amount exceeds the amount of
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electricity
produced by the
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solar
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panels
utility grid provides additional
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electricity
.
On the other hand
if the amount of
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electicity
consumption is less than what
is provided
by the
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solar
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panels
excess
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solar
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electricity


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will
flow back to utility meter.
In conclusion
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solar
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panels
are great and safe way of providing
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electricity
to
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consumers
.
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IELTS essay Providing electricity through solar panels

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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