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I think people move little during this period. This has many implications. The most important effect is the pandemic. The pandemic has negatively affected our lives. Unfortunately, we can't get out of the house, so we don't get a chance to walk and play sports. The other reason is that people consume a lot of fast food. Especially in the United States, the obesity rate has shown a big rise in the last 2 years. Another reason is that people use machines a lot. People prefer to drive rather than walk. For these and similar reasons, people are overweight.

I think people move little during this period. This has many implications. The most important effect is the pandemic. The pandemic has negatively affected our lives. Unfortunately, we can't get out of the house, so we don't get a chance to walk and play sports. The other reason is that people consume a lot of fast food. Especially in the United States, the obesity rate has shown a big rise in the last 2 years. Another reason is that people use machines a lot. People prefer to drive rather than walk. For these and similar reasons, people are overweight. oEwxb
I think people move little during this period. This has many implications. The most important effect is the pandemic. The pandemic has negatively affected our lives. Unfortunately, we can't get out of the house, so we don't get a chance to walk and play sports. The other reason is that people consume a lot of fast food. Especially in the United States, the obesity rate has shown a big rise in the last 2 years. Another reason is that people use machines a lot. People prefer to drive rather than walk. For these and similar reasons, people are overweight.
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IELTS essay I think people move little during this period. This has many implications. The most important effect is the pandemic. The pandemic has negatively affected our lives. Unfortunately, we can't get out of the house, so we don't get a chance to walk and play sports. The other reason is that people consume a lot of fast food. Especially in the United States, the obesity rate has shown a big rise in the last 2 years. Another reason is that people use machines a lot. People prefer to drive rather than walk. For these and similar reasons, people are overweight.

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