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describe an invention that you belive to be important and has changed how people

describe an invention that you belive to be important and has changed how people D60Y6
most of us still has your own laptop. This is important thing that we have nowaday and i think we are so lucky when the laptop has been invented for we to used. Young people used lqptop more than old people, so am i. We used laptop for a lot purpose the fist is forentertainment ( watching moive, listening to music, playing game, . . . ) second, we used it for study ( research the information, find document, . . . ) and work. Most of software that we- Publics Relations and communicationes student must to know how to used are running on laptop like Ps, Ai, . . . . So i think it's more important for young people than old people.
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nowaday
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,
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am
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i
. We
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for
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a lot purpose


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the
fist is
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forentertainment
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watching
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, listening to music, playing game
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it for study
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research the information, find document
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and work.
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Relations and
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student
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IELTS essay describe an invention that you belive to be important and has changed how people

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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