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1. Is it easy or difficult for you to talk to strangers?

1. Is it easy or difficult for you to talk to strangers? gDKdg
In my opinion, it’s quite difficult for me to talk to strangers. First, I don’t know how to start a conversation smoothly. I often feel a little bit uncomfortable because I don’t have a small talk to talk to and I didn’t know how to extend the conversation. Maybe in speaking English, my obstacles is I don’t have enough vocabularies or sentences to communicate my true feelings. But I think it is a social skills which I can practice.
In my opinion, it’s quite difficult for me to talk to strangers.
First
, I don’t know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a conversation
smoothly
. I
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often
feel a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
uncomfortable
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because
I don’t have a
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small
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "talk to".
talk to talk to
and I didn’t know how to extend the conversation. Maybe in speaking English, my obstacles is I don’t have
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enough
vocabularies or sentences to communicate my true feelings.
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But
I
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think
it is a social
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "skill"?
skills
which I can practice.

IELTS essay 1. Is it easy or difficult for you to talk to strangers?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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