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Production of coloured paper clips

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The following report will describe the process of the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. There are four major steps for achieving the satisfactory result. The process initiates by melting the raw material, which in this case is the plastic. The melted plastic is then poured into three different kinds of moulds as per the requirement. The moulds are classified and differentiated by their colours. The three coloured categories of the mould used here is: Red, Blue and Yellow. When the plastic paper clips are ready from the mould, it is then send for quality control. This process is performed by a machine and the machine-check analysis for the strength of the product. If the product is not up to the mark, the paper clips are rejected from this very step. The paper clips which have been positively approved by the machine quality control are then sorted by hand to be then divided into two types of groups. One of the two groups is mixed coloured clips and the other is the single coloured clips. Immaterial to what group they belong to, the clips are then processed towards the quality control again. However, this time it is not just the strength but the division of the clips according to the coloured arrangements. During the quality control, if they still have doubt in regards to any aspect of the product, it is sent back for step three, which is sorting by hand. Finally, when the product has been assessed completely and has fulfilled the satisfactory requirements for it to be approved, the paper clips are then packed and despatched respectively.
The following report will
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describe
the process of the production of
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coloured
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plastic
paper
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clips
in a
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small
factory. There are four major steps for achieving the satisfactory result. The process initiates by melting the raw material, which
in this case
is the
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plastic
. The melted
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plastic
is then poured into three
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different
kinds of
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moulds
as per the requirement.
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The
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moulds
are classified
and differentiated by their
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colours
.
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The
three
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coloured
categories of the
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mould
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used
here is: Red, Blue and Yellow. When the
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plastic
paper
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clips
are ready from the
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mould
, it is then
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send
for
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quality
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control
. This process
is performed
by a machine and the machine-
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check
analysis for the strength of the
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product
. If the
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product
is not up to the mark, the paper
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clips
are rejected
from this
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very
step.

The paper
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clips
which have been
positively
approved by the machine
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quality
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control
are then sorted by hand to be then divided into two types of groups. One of the two groups
is mixed
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coloured
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clips
and the other is the
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single coloured
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clips
. Immaterial to what group they belong to, the
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clips
are then processed towards the
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quality
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control
again.
However
, this time it is not
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just
the strength
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but
the division of the
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clips
according to the
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coloured
arrangements. During the
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quality
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control
, if they
still
have doubt
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in regards to
any aspect of the
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product
, it is
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sent
back for step three, which is sorting by hand.
Finally
, when the
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product
has
been assessed
completely and has fulfilled the satisfactory requirements for it to
be approved
, the paper
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clips
are then packed and despatched
respectively
.
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IELTS essay Production of coloured paper clips

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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