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process for manufacturing chocolate

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The flowchart presents the process for manufacturing chocolate. The process of manufacturing chocolate can be described in ten steps. This process begins with the cacao trees growing. First of all, cacao trees grow in S. America, Africa, Indonesia. Pods grow in the cacao tree. Next, ripe red pods are harvested, and then, white cocoa beans are cored from inside. The third step is to ferment. White chocolate beans are fermented. After that, beans are spread in sun to dry. Later, beans which are dry are putted in large sacks. Afterwards, sacks are transported by train or lorry. The next step is to sent to factory. Sacks which are transported are taken to factory. Then, beans are roasted in 350 centigrade degree. After roasting, the beans are passed onto the next stage. Beans are crushed by a crush machine, and then, beans are removed from outer shell. Inner part then are pressed by a press machine. Lastly, liquid chocolate is produced.

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described
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begins
 with the cacao trees growing. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, cacao trees grow in S. America, Africa, Indonesia. Pods grow in the cacao tree. Next
, ripe red pods are harvested
, and then, white cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are cored
 from inside. The third step is to ferment. White chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are fermented
. After that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are spread
 in sun to dry. Later, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 which are dry are putted
 in large sacks. Afterwards, sacks are transported
 by train or lorry.

The next
 step is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to factory. Sacks which are transported
are taken
 to factory. Then, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are roasted
 in 350 centigrade degree. After roasting, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are passed
 onto the next
 stage. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
Beans
are crushed
 by a crush machine, and then, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are removed
 from outer shell. Inner part then are pressed
 by a press machine. Lastly
, liquid chocolate is produced
. 